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lavendertook ([personal profile] lavendertook) wrote in [community profile] agonyaunt 2022-02-23 01:45 pm (UTC)

LOL! Nailed it!

But see, your Unferth is so better written than LW because he presents the arm and saving the Hall as something that he clearly does not understand the value of, and LW goes on and on describing what her parents say about Jane that makes it very hard to believe she does nto see why they would value these things so greatly and see what she values as really problematic to say the least. I would believe in your Unferth and totally be able to suspend my sense of disbelief the way I just can’t with this LW, as hard as I’m trying. But I have a hard time believing Trumpers are real, too--I think they are just poorly written as well, so what do I know!

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